1. This is indeed a hard world to live in. People effort for elevate their value in various way.
2. When they find a job, they should like to express as well as possible. Also they want to look well. There are some ways to manage themselves. It is preparing them, and appeal to others who might be a CEO, chief, senior.
3. First, People study more and more for are a best in their field. They plan what they have to do, after decided their major or aim.
4. They study foreign language, and get certified as much as possible. Sometimes they take part in many social activities.
5. In Korea, lots of university student spend time for their dream. They go to institutes for learning English, and get license, also remodel their character even if it is a vacation. Moreover, someone join a work training camp for experience executive ability. It is also ticketed for personal history. And of course it is for brighter future.
6. Another way is hosting their life at internet site like as www.cyworld.com (Korea), www.facebook.com (USA). Most of people can show their life, concern. It is a way of PR by visualization.
7. They usually post up about them such as putting photo at album, some writings on the bulletin board, and putting video file and so on. Cyworld is the best site to show individual personality In Korea. Most of Korean have own webpage. Everyone can decorate it such as background, music, menu tool, and so on.
8. They are satisfied to show about their life. And they want to have shown better from great their webpage.
9. All of the above must be a purpose to live for the competitive struggle of life. It is a way to try flattering themselves. Also it is for bright future.
10. If they find an appropriate way through fine PR without unselfish, they would get a good chance. And they could earn a comfortable living.
2. When they find a job, they should like to express as well as possible. Also they want to look well. There are some ways to manage themselves. It is preparing them, and appeal to others who might be a CEO, chief, senior.
3. First, People study more and more for are a best in their field. They plan what they have to do, after decided their major or aim.
4. They study foreign language, and get certified as much as possible. Sometimes they take part in many social activities.
5. In Korea, lots of university student spend time for their dream. They go to institutes for learning English, and get license, also remodel their character even if it is a vacation. Moreover, someone join a work training camp for experience executive ability. It is also ticketed for personal history. And of course it is for brighter future.
6. Another way is hosting their life at internet site like as www.cyworld.com (Korea), www.facebook.com (USA). Most of people can show their life, concern. It is a way of PR by visualization.
7. They usually post up about them such as putting photo at album, some writings on the bulletin board, and putting video file and so on. Cyworld is the best site to show individual personality In Korea. Most of Korean have own webpage. Everyone can decorate it such as background, music, menu tool, and so on.
8. They are satisfied to show about their life. And they want to have shown better from great their webpage.
9. All of the above must be a purpose to live for the competitive struggle of life. It is a way to try flattering themselves. Also it is for bright future.
10. If they find an appropriate way through fine PR without unselfish, they would get a good chance. And they could earn a comfortable living.
Thank you to let us know something new about Korean life style, but your paragraphs doesn't have that relate between each other. The first paragraph until five. They talk about "How do the people struggling in them lives to come best" Then you goes to talk about social websites. Anyway, it is so good when a person have goal or goals he lives for it, and it is way nice to make relationship with other to help each other for something good.
ReplyDeleteI agree with you Gee, PR is very important in our life.I think everyone has to know about it that makes the life easier and successful.Also it is good for everyone to make his/her goals and go throw them.Sometimes the website helps us to improve our abilities but not always.
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ReplyDeleteI agree with you!!!....get more friends is very important in our life,and also is a very happy thing. Dont always be alone, that can make your life very hard..People should make their life be fantastic.
ReplyDeleteI totally agree with you. Friends is very important for us. We need friends everywhere. PR is also very important. I think more and more people use web to meet some new friends. Although they from different country. May be we have some new ways about RP in the furture.
ReplyDeleteperfect,when I was in China last summer，I met more than ten friends through the Internet，they told me a lot about MSU，then I decided to choose MSU，we should cherish every friend we have，they are our wealth，so we should give them a hand if they are cornered...
ReplyDeleteI do not agree whit you.I think it depends on different situations. Admittedly, it is really important to make friends. We do not need too much friends, whereas, we need some friends who are really good for you, and when you need help they can help you. So when we make friends, we should know if it really a good friends to you.
ReplyDeleteYou are right, in my opinion, people can not live without friends is a truth,but it is not means we should make a lot of friends or we should focus on make friends. Because, the basis of make friends is they should have similar hobby or character, which means not everyone suit make friends with each other.Also, friends can divided many styles,such as best friends, common friends, and so on. So, we should find friends who are suit for us.
ReplyDeleteI agree with you, public relations are important in people's life, and more and more people do care about it. friends can always give you help when you needed. When you are working, this relation become more important, it is one of your ability and an important part of your successful life.
ReplyDeleteI agree with you. The raltions with your friends will be a important role in your future.It can be a kind of resources. You should depend on that to do many things successful in this society. So, choose friends who can learn from each others are very inportant.
ReplyDeleteI agree with you. Public relation is a problem we have to face. Along with the development of high technology, people graduate from the education has become higher and higher. More and more people feel it is very difficult to get a suited job which they like. The public relation obviously becomes an important point even though in America where most people believe it is full of fair. Sometimes public relation is one of reasons why you can get the job.
ReplyDeletePublic relation escalate to be an extremely crucial factor of the"sucessful living" in 21th century.That means only a powerful diverse teamwork nowaday can build the Eternal Empire State Building.Approximately,to urge you to constantly recharge yourself by absorbing useful information, skills,or konwledge,you can become the best brave soldier,however maybe only based on these it is hard to be a general.In fact,we need others to provide a lot of assistance,therfore we should get more and more friends as posssible as we can.Pbulic relation is a system of information,a protective umbrella,a think tank,just benefits to yourself.In 21th century,oligo-public relation will make yourself almost impossible to push forward.
ReplyDelete1. This is indeed a hard world to live in. People MAKE effortS TO elevate their valueS in various wayS.
ReplyDelete2. When they (TRY TO?) find a job, they TRY TO(?) to express THEMSELVES as well as possible. Also they want to look well. There are some ways to manage themselves. It is preparing them(?), and appeal to others who might be a CEO, chief, senior.
3. First, People study more and more for THEIR best in their field. They plan ON what they LIKE to do, after DECIDING their majorS or aimS.
4. They study foreign languageS, and get certified as much as possible. Sometimes they take part in many social activities.
5. In Korea, lots of university student spend time for their dream. They go to institutes for learning English, and get license, also remodel their characterS even if it is a vacation(?). Moreover, PEOPLE join a work training camp for ACQUIRING executive ability. It is also ticketed(?) for personal history. And of course it is for THEIR brighter future.
6. Another way is hosting their LIVES ON THE internet site like * www.cyworld.com (Korea), www.facebook.com (USA). Most * people can show their LIVES AND concernS. It is a way of PR by visualization.
7. They usually post up THINGS about them such as putting photoS ON THE album, some writings on the bulletin board, and * video fileS and so on. Cyworld is the best site to show individual personality In Korea. Most * KoreanS have THEIR own webpageS. Everyone can decorate it such as background, music, menu tool, and so on.
8. They are satisfied to show * their LIVES. And they want to have shown better from great their webpage(?).
9. All of the above must CREATE(?) a purpose to live IN the competitive struggle of life. It is a way to try flattering themselves. Also it is for THEIR bright future.
10. If they find an appropriate way through fine PR without BEING unselfish, they would get a good chance. And they could LIVE a comfortable LIFE.
First of all, I was able to understand generally what you were trying to say, but as you can see many ?s, some parts were unclear. Please go though your sentences again and see if you can learn some from my feedback.
Compared to the time when I was a child, people have a way more ways to get to know people. It was just unimaginable to be acquainted with someone who is living far from you unless you have a pen pal. Now it's so easy to do with the Internet. Besides, there are also many ways to communicate with others. However, strangely, people seem to be feeling lonely and isolated even more than before. It is a serious problem in Japan and probably in Korea, too, that people stay in their rooms and never go out of their houses. We didn't have that kind of problems before. But as it becomes so easy to communicate without actually meeting them, people came not to see them face to face, which I think is a huge problem. So I think we should cherish face to face communication more than before.
I agree with you, everyone need a people to deal with them and communicate with them. Nobody can live alone without people or freinds. But there are some people they do not want to have 20 friends . They just want to have 2 or 3 .Thanks for sharing some information about your country. It was a good essay.
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